Falling in Love


She was nervous and fidgety

making her seem like a twelve year old about to see her crush.
He noticed too, pointing out
she was shaking like a leaf.
She’d fallen in love. 

@ donetta sifford 3-30-2013


This weekend we’re asking for exactly 33 words including an idiom somewhere within.  Examples of idioms include – add fuel to the fire or wear your heart on your sleeve.



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12 responses

  1. Thanks. I have dreadful insomnia so sometimes I greatly appreciate if some parts are forgotten in my writing. 🙂

  2. lol. Come to think of it, that was probably it. 🙂 Thank you.

  3. Aww,this is so sweet,loved it:-)

  4. Nice! (My shaking like a leaf was accompanied by the urge to lose my lunch, but I'll forget that part, okay? :))

  5. Such a lovely piece of writing! Brings back memories… 🙂

  6. Awww so sweet and cute! First love… *sigh*

  7. Very lovely. And I love Barbara's comment as well.

  8. Ha! I'm laughing at Barbara's comment. Taking the sweet the extra step. This is great. Thanks for linking up!

  9. This is such a sensitive piece.

  10. either that, or she needs some sugar. 🙂 nicely done.

  11. So cute and sweet! (:

  12. This is sweet and the idioms work perfectly. Nice job!

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