Rising From Ashes

seen tragedy, just a child
professor x promised help
           emotionally, physically, 
           xaveir bound jean grey
men wanting control

beautiful, psychic
telepathic, telekinetic
unstoppable force
jean and i emerged
we are power

@ donetta sifford 5-5-2013   written for:   http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/05/trifextra-week-sixty-six.html

This weekend we’re having some fun with the prompt, some super-powered fun, that is. We’re asking you to write the origin story to the superhero of your choice in exactly 33 words.


12 responses

  1. she did. yes this is Jean Grey. though i believe of the latest, she took out Xaiver but that was the Dark Phoenix. she rose again i hear and is now head master over the school. i heard she may make an appearance on the new Wolverine movie they are making. hope so.

  2. Great one.. the Phoenix sounds good.

  3. Pictures go well twit the theme.Nice…

  4. I'd love to know more about this one! Thanks for linking up. Hope to see you back next week.

  5. Love this Donetta! Phoenix is one of my favourite superheroes. Love the way you changed the voice at the end.

  6. I like this choice ;D

  7. she actually just about ended up taking everyone out, didn't she? (This was Jean Grey, right?)

  8. I think I have heard of the Phoenix rising. Good creation.

  9. Interesting one specially cos its a “she”:-)Cool pic & a lovely poem

  10. Well, I want to know whether the Phoenix went out and kicked Professor x's ass. Very well done and cool poem.

  11. The Phoenix sounds like a force to be reckoned with. Love the pics, too!

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