Passing On

photo by Steven Kelly

Everyone in a rush,
speeding through life,
longing to be the leader.
Risking all on slippery slopes.
Ghost of the highway laugh,
to sounds of crunching metal.
Last breath of another passing.  

@ donetta sifford 8-26-2013
Written for:  The Mag

11 responses

  1. Well done….and thanks for sharing

  2. Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. 🙂

  3. It does seem everyone and everything is set on highest speed mode.

  4. I know. I prefer passing on dry, straight roads. 🙂

  5. especially the last 3 lines, moved me – well done, i like your response to the photo prompt

  6. Very true Donetta….sad but true….we rush and rash to our own demise…

  7. O, those slippery slopes…

  8. Well done. Perceptive writing.

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